2009年1月12日 星期一

My Third Pen pal~

Katie is my third pen pal. She comes from America.

This is message I leave for her..

hi~Katie
how's your new year's eve?
I went to Taipei 101 with my friends. We saw 101 surround by firewors. The view was very magnificent.­ You can see it at this website. http://tw.yo­utube.com/wa­tch?v=W61pYJ­C8i3M
Do you know Taipei 101?
It's the tallest skyscraper in world.

If I have sentence wrong or what else, please let me know.Because I want to improve my English~~ Thank you : )

happy new year~
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Her reply..

it was pretty nice. i just went out with some friends.
really? i haven't ever seen it. whats it used for? hmm...your sentences are ok...from what i see you only spelled fireworks wrong, an i don't think the very in front of magnificent needs to be there lol...

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